Feedback on Animatic

after the group had watched our anamatic a lot of questions where asked such as "why isn't there a soundtrack" and "why was there so many shots of bottles" as a solution to these criticism we are going to either make or sample a soundtrack to add tension and give a feel to which type of thriller our piece is. sound effects will also be used to show diagetic sound coming from the shots, such as the noise made when typing on the typewriter, and the pouring of water, and the pages being turned in the book which the character is browsing. also the shot duration was suggested as being a bit too long, and the durations of shots should be varied during the piece. the titles Incorporated in the shots should be changed and either used as a shot which shows many things such as more than one actor or the production and directions at the same time. the soundtrack will be the first thing to work on and we shall then edit our shots to make the sequence flow better and hopefully make more sense but not give away too much information about the plot.

damien patrick luke jenna....u get me