Idea =]

Our thriler has to be 1minute 30 - 2 minutes in duration.


Our Idea:
There are two teeneagers that drive up to dark and deserted public toilets, after a long journey the just need some time to freshen up, there is nothing around them, they brighten the headlights but the battery on the car runs out, they enter the toilets, it is a heavy door so to keep it open the put a rock in front of it to wedge it open, unknown to them there was someone watching the whole time, maybe it was planned?!
whilst one of the teeneagers enters the toilet cubicle the other peers into the mirror, whilst an unknown charater creeps up on them ready to attack, he kicks the rock the door shuts, everything goes black, the unknown character is hiding in one of the cubicle's, the teeneagers panick, they are deserted no power in the car, no lights and trapped in the toilets, they try the door, it wont move, they scream for help, no reply, no signal on their mobiles, they panick thats when the lights flicker, reflecting a spark of hope in the teenagers eyes, they black out again, thats when the unknown character pounces dragging one of the teenagers away, they scream but there is nothing that can help them.. then our title will pop up on a black background.

Edits
For our edits's we want it to be effective towards our trailer and make the audience continue to watch, so we will focus on jump cuts, colour change (different coulour washes) or negatives, we believe this will help the audience understand the panic if there is a flash of colours.

We were also thinking of fades into sillohettes, so for example one of the teeneagers could look into the sink, a bowl full of water and see there reflection, then see someone behind them (the unknown character).


We are now creating our storyboardddd =D